Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，句子结构不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免重复。可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, my favourite teacher was my high school history teacher. Her classes were very interesting and enlightening, and I learned a lot from her. Thanks to her, I achieved good scores in history exams.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且简洁明了。

例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I changed schools and they live far away now.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连词连接具体细节，表达清晰且有逻辑。

例: My favourite teacher helped me improve my exam grades because her lessons were interesting and enlightening. I enjoyed her classes and learned a lot from the textbooks, which helped me get good test results.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达想法，避免重复，清楚说明自己的职业和未来计划。

例: Actually, I am currently a teacher. After university, I wanted to become a teacher because I believe it is a valuable career. I feel a sense of achievement from teaching, so I really enjoy it.

× Yes, my favorite teachers is in high schools and it's a historic teachers.

✓ Yes, my favorite teacher is in high school and she's a historic teacher.

The subject 'teachers' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a singular and plural mismatch. Also, 'high schools' should be singular to match 'teacher'. 'It's' refers to 'it is' which is incorrect for a person; 'she's' (she is) is correct. 'Teachers' should be singular to match 'teacher'.

× Her class was so interesting and enlightening and I got a lot from her lessons and and I can get get a good history scores and in the.

✓ Her class was so interesting and enlightening, and I got a lot from her lessons, and I could get good history scores.

'Scores' is plural but 'a good' implies singular; 'scores' should be singular or 'good history scores' without 'a'. Also, 'can get get' is a repetition and tense inconsistency; 'could get' fits past context. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper ending.

× No, I'm not touched with my teachers in primary schools because our primary schools and middle school, high school is not the same ones and it's so far away from, yes, far away from my times.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my teachers from primary school because our primary school, middle school, and high school are not the same, and they are far away from me.

The phrase 'touched with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in touch with'. Also, 'primary schools' should be singular to match 'my teachers'. 'Far away from my times' is unclear; 'far away from me' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well, I think many ways is the examination grade and because of the teachers so interesting and enlightening.

✓ Well, I think there are many ways the examination grade improved because the teacher was so interesting and enlightening.

'Many ways is' is incorrect; 'many ways are' or 'there are many ways' is correct. 'Teachers' should be singular to match 'the teacher'. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× So I enjoy the class dance.

✓ So I enjoy the class.

'Class dance' is unclear and likely incorrect; probably intended 'class'. The word 'dance' is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× I learned about the the knowledges from book and I can get a good grade in the test.

✓ I learned knowledge from books and I could get a good grade on the test.

'Knowledges' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is uncountable and singular. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to generalize. 'Can get' should be past tense 'could get' to match past context. 'In the test' should be 'on the test'.

× Actually I'm a teacher now after the universities I want to be a teacher because I think teacher is a valuable career.

✓ Actually, I'm a teacher now. After university, I wanted to be a teacher because I think teaching is a valuable career.

'Universities' should be singular 'university' to refer to the institution attended. 'I want' should be past tense 'I wanted' to match the timeline. 'Teacher is a valuable career' is incorrect; 'teaching is a valuable career' is correct.

× So and so I trust to do this.

✓ So, I trust myself to do this.

'Trust to do this' is incomplete; 'trust myself to do this' is correct. 'So and so' is unclear and unnecessary.

× And now I usually feel more achievements from the lessons, so I love to.

✓ And now I usually feel more accomplished from the lessons, so I love it.

'Feel more achievements' is incorrect; 'feel more accomplished' is correct. 'I love to' is incomplete; 'I love it' completes the thought.