Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误，比如时态不一致（'ate' 应该是 'eat'），并且句子结构较为简单，缺少连接词使得表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词如 'and' 或 'then' 来使句子更自然流畅。

例: I usually spend my birthday with my close friends. We often have a small party where we eat cake, chat, and play games together.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，前半句用过去时，后半句却用现在时，导致表达不自然。建议保持时态一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: When I was young, my mother cooked my favorite dish, and I invited my close friends to my home. We always had a small party to celebrate.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe celebrating my birthday is important because it makes me feel special and appreciated. Moreover, it's a great excuse to hang out with friends.

提案: 回答内容明确，但句子结构可以更自然，且部分表达不够准确。建议调整句子结构，使用更地道的表达，并加入连接词。

例: I think the most important birthdays to celebrate in China are our parents', especially when they turn 60. This age is considered a significant milestone and a big tradition.

× We ate cake, chat and play together.

✓ We ate cake, chatted and played together.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情，动词需要用过去式。'chat'和'play'应改为过去式'chatted'和'played'。

× We will have a small party on it.

✓ We would have a small party on it.

句子描述过去习惯，使用过去将来时更合适，'will'应改为'would'。

× It is the one which you will feel special and appreciate and it is an excuse to hang out with friends.

✓ It is the one when you will feel special and appreciated, and it is an excuse to hang out with friends.

'which'用法不当，改为'when'更合适；'appreciate'应为被动形式'appreciated'，表示被感激。

× I think the most important to celebrate in China is definitely our parents, especially they turn 60.

✓ I think the most important birthdays to celebrate in China are definitely our parents', especially when they turn 60.

'the most important'后应接复数名词'birthdays'，动词用复数'are'，'they turn 60'前加'when'表示时间状语。

× It is a big tradition and milestone age for them.

✓ It is a big tradition and a milestone age for them.

'milestone age'前缺少冠词'a'，需要加上以符合英语习惯。