Birthday— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但有些语法错误和用词不当，如“times”应为“time”，“matters”应为“matter”。建议注意单复数一致性，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually keep my birthday celebrations simple. For example, I enjoy having a nice dinner with my best friends or family. Although I don't like big parties, I really value spending quality time with people who matter to me.

提案: 回答内容有趣，但表达不够正式，且存在语法错误，如“red envelope”应为复数“red envelopes”，“see”应为“seen”，“those money”应为“that money”。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意时态和数的一致。

例: When I was a child, my birthdays were less about cake and more about receiving money. All the aunties gave me red envelopes, and my mom said she would keep the money for me. However, I never saw that money again, which was quite disappointing.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，如“the day I born”应为“the day I was born”，“share my lucky”应为“share my luck”。建议注意语法结构，并丰富细节使表达更具体。

例: Yes, definitely. My birthday is not just the day I was born; it feels like a lucky day for me. I enjoy sharing my luck and love with all the people I care about.

提案: 回答情感真挚，但存在语法错误，如“cook”应为“cooks”，“deserve”应为“deserves”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Definitely my mom. She carried me for nine months and still cooks for me even when I say I'm not hungry. If anyone deserves cakes, candles, and emotional speeches, it's her.

× I do appreciate spending quality times with people who matters to me.

✓ I do appreciate spending quality time with people who matter to me.

“times”应为不可数名词“time”，表示“美好时光”；“matters”应为动词复数形式“matter”，因为主语是复数“people”。

× I have never see those money again.

✓ I have never seen that money again.

“see”应使用过去分词“seen”，因为这是现在完成时态的结构；“money”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“money”。

× Well when I was a kid my birthday was less about cake but more about money.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, my birthday was less about cake but more about money.

句中缺少逗号，影响句子结构的清晰度，需加逗号。

× All the aunties gave me red envelope and my mom said she would keep it for me.

✓ All the aunties gave me red envelopes and my mom said she would keep them for me.

“red envelope”应为复数“red envelopes”，因为是多个红包；代词“it”应改为“them”指代复数。

× because my birthday is not just the day I born for me and it's more like a lucky day.

✓ because my birthday is not just the day I was born for me and it's more like a lucky day.

“I born”缺少助动词，应为过去式“was born”。

× She carried you for nine months and still cook for you when you say you are not hungry.

✓ She carried you for nine months and still cooks for you when you say you are not hungry.

主语是第三人称单数“she”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“cooks”。