Internet— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When did you start using the internet?
受験者
I think I started using the Internet pretty early, maybe around primary school. At first it was just playing little flash games or watching cartoons online. I didn't realize it would become a huge part of my life later on.
試験官
How often do you go online?
受験者
Honestly all the time. I basically online from the moment I wake up to when I go to bed.
試験官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
受験者
Yes, when I was a child my parents were so strict about screen time uses and they think if I use the screen too much it will hurt my eyes. So they only allowed me to use the Internet on weekends. But this restriction helps me focus more on my homework and develop better time management skills.
試験官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
受験者
Yes I do. I try to justify it by saying it is just for work or learning, but sometimes I catch myself mindlessly screwing my phone. It is something I'm trying to be more aware of.
試験官
What would you do without the internet?
受験者
MMM probably read more, write more, or get out more. I think I'd be a little bored at first, but it might actually feel kind of peaceful. Additional Tiktok sounds scary but also a kind of refreshing.
評価
総合
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但可以更直接回应问题，避免冗余。建议开头直接说明开始使用互联网的时间，然后简要说明当时的用途，最后表达感受。
例: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. Initially, I used it mainly to play flash games and watch cartoons. I didn't expect it to become such an important part of my daily life later.
How often do you go online?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答不够完整且有语法错误。建议直接回答频率，并用连接词补充具体时间段，保证句子完整且自然。
例: I go online almost all the time because I use the internet from the moment I wake up until I go to bed.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达略显口语化。建议使用更正式的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: Yes, when I was a child, my parents were strict about screen time because they believed excessive use could harm my eyes. Therefore, I was only allowed to use the internet on weekends. However, this restriction helped me concentrate on my homework and improve my time management skills.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法和用词错误。建议使用正确的短语和词汇，避免口语化表达，并用连接词使内容更连贯。
例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online. Although I try to convince myself that it is for work or learning, sometimes I find myself mindlessly scrolling through my phone. I am trying to become more aware of this habit.
What would you do without the internet?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答不够正式且有语法错误，内容表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免口语填充词，使用连贯的句子表达想法。
例: Without the internet, I would probably read and write more, and spend more time outdoors. Although I might feel bored at first, it could also be peaceful and refreshing.
文法
× I basically online from the moment I wake up to when I go to bed.
✓ I am basically online from the moment I wake up to when I go to bed.
句子缺少动词，应该使用be动词am来构成现在时态的状态描述。
× my parents were so strict about screen time uses and they think if I use the screen too much it will hurt my eyes.
✓ my parents were so strict about screen time use and they think if I use the screen too much it will hurt my eyes.
screen time是不可数名词，不能用复数形式uses，应使用单数use。
× sometimes I catch myself mindlessly screwing my phone.
✓ sometimes I catch myself mindlessly scrolling my phone.
动词screw用法不当，应该用scrolling表示滑动手机屏幕。
× Additional Tiktok sounds scary but also a kind of refreshing.
✓ Additionally, TikTok sounds scary but also kind of refreshing.
句首副词用法错误，应使用Additionally表示“此外”，并且TikTok首字母大写。
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