Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: I started using the internet when I was a child. I remember my uncle taught me how to use it for the first time, which was many years ago.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并具体说明上网的频率和原因。

例: I go online every day because the internet is very common nowadays. It provides many conveniences, such as easy access to information and communication, which I really enjoy.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整，缺少具体细节。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达原因，并补充更多细节。

例: Yes, I remember a time when my parents did not allow me to use the internet because they thought it would affect my studies.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，观点表达不够清晰。建议明确表达观点，避免重复，并用具体理由支持观点。

例: No, I don't think I spend too much time online. The internet is very common now, and many young people use it for study and entertainment, so spending time online can be useful.

提案: 回答不连贯，表达含糊，缺少具体内容。建议明确表达观点，使用连贯句子，并具体说明没有互联网时的生活。

例: Without the internet, I think I would be happier because I could spend more time outdoors and focus on real-life activities, unlike now when I spend a lot of time online.

× Well, when I remember my first time to use Internet since I was a child, it's a really a long time.

✓ Well, when I remember my first time using the Internet since I was a child, it's really a long time.

这里“first time to use”用法不正确，应该用动名词形式“using”表示“第一次做某事”。动词后接动名词是固定搭配。

× Well, when I remember my first time to use Internet since I was a child, it's a really a long time.

✓ Well, when I remember my first time using the Internet since I was a child, it's really a long time.

“Internet”前面需要加定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是特定的互联网。

× So the the Internet can provide so many convenience something for me and I really love that.

✓ So the Internet can provide so many conveniences for me and I really love that.

“convenience”是不可数名词，不能用“so many”，应改为复数“conveniences”表示多种便利。

× So the the Internet can provide so many convenience something for me and I really love that.

✓ So the Internet can provide so many conveniences for me and I really love that.

句中重复出现了“the the”，应删除多余的“the”。

× Yes, of course I remember that I I wasn't use Internet.

✓ Yes, of course I remember that I wasn't using the Internet.

“wasn't use”时态错误，应该用过去进行时“wasn't using”表示过去某段时间内没有使用。

× Umm, that's because my parents forbidden I I forbidden me to use and they think it will affect my.

✓ Umm, that's because my parents forbade me to use it and they think it will affect me.

“forbidden”是形容词或过去分词，句中应使用动词过去式“forbade”，且“forbidden I”错误，应为“forbade me”。“affect my”缺少宾语，应为“affect me”。

× Uh, nowadays the Internet is really common and that's why many young people will, umm, add additive to it.

✓ Uh, nowadays the Internet is really common and that's why many young people will, umm, be addicted to it.

“add additive”用法错误，正确表达是“be addicted to”，表示“沉迷于”。

× It's a good idea to spend a lot of time to use Internet.

✓ It's a good idea to spend a lot of time using the Internet.

“spend time”后应接动名词形式，不能用不定式“to use”。

× It's a good idea to spend a lot of time to use Internet.

✓ It's a good idea to spend a lot of time using the Internet.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Oh, that's interesting question because without the Internet I think I will really happy.

✓ Oh, that's an interesting question because without the Internet I think I will be really happy.

“interesting question”前缺少不定冠词“an”。“will really happy”缺少系动词“be”。

× Oh, that's interesting question because without the Internet I think I will really happy.

✓ Oh, that's an interesting question because without the Internet I think I will be really happy.

“without the Internet”正确，但句中缺少“be”动词，导致句子不完整。

× I will be really happy and it seem to be bad to the past.

✓ I will be really happy and it seems to be bad in the past.

“it seem”主谓不一致，应为“it seems”。“to the past”用法不当，应该用“in the past”。