Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo no shizen na tsukaikata ni shite, fukuzatsu na bunpou no misu o naosu koto ga hitsuyou desu. Tatoeba, 'I started using the internet when I was in junior high school. The first computer I used was my father's laptop, so I've been using it for about eight years.' to iu fuu ni, chokusetsu kotae, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai.

例: I started using the internet when I was in junior high school. The first computer I used was my father's laptop, so I've been using it for about eight years.

提案: Answer wa motto seikaku ni shite, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte, rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I use the internet daily because it is necessary for my studies and hobbies. For example, I watch films and research papers online.' to iu fuu ni, jisho-teki na tango o tsukatte, jikan no hyougen mo seikaku ni shite kudasai.

例: I use the internet daily because it is necessary for my studies and hobbies. For example, I watch films and research papers online.

提案: Answer wa motto kantan ni shite, chokusetsu kotae o tsukuri, setsuzoku-go de rikai o tasukeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, 'I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because I have been using it since junior high school, which is over 10 years.' to iu fuu ni, jisho-teki na tango o tsukatte kudasai.

例: I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because I have been using it since junior high school, which is over 10 years.

提案: Answer wa motto rikai shi yasuku, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte, jisho-teki na tango o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I spend about six hours online daily, which is a bit too long. However, it is an essential part of my life because I need the internet for almost everything I do.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I spend about six hours online daily, which is a bit too long. However, it is an essential part of my life because I need the internet for almost everything I do.

提案: Answer wa motto seikaku ni shite, chokusetsu kotae o tsukuri, bunpou no misu o naosu hitsuyou ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'It's hard to imagine life without the internet because almost everything we do requires going online.' to iu fuu ni, kanzen na bunshou o tsukutte kudasai.

例: It's hard to imagine life without the internet because almost everything we do requires going online.

× I started using Internet since I when I was in junior high school and the first computer I used was my father's laptop and.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in junior high school, and the first computer I used was my father's laptop.

The phrase 'since I when I was' is incorrect; 'since' should be replaced with 'when' to indicate the time in the past when the action started. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. The conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed to complete the sentence properly.

× Well, currently I use the Internet in a daily basis because it's necessary for for my study and other hobbies, for example watching films or researching papers.

✓ Well, currently I use the Internet on a daily basis because it's necessary for my study and other hobbies, for example watching films or researching papers.

The correct preposition to use with 'daily basis' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, there is a repeated word 'for' which should be corrected to a single 'for'.

× Oh well, it's really hard to imagine be because nowadays almost everything. We do requires going online so it's really hard to.

✓ Oh well, it's really hard to imagine because nowadays almost everything we do requires going online, so it's really hard to.

The phrase 'imagine be' is incorrect; 'be' should be removed. Also, the sentence is fragmented and should be connected properly. The period after 'everything' should be removed and the sentence combined for clarity.