Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但部分句子略显冗长且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

例: I started using the Internet when I was in primary school, which was relatively late compared to the younger generation. However, I still remember the first time I surfed the Internet; I was amazed because I watched so many videos.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

例: I go online every day because I work at an International School, so it's essential for me to keep in touch with my colleagues and work efficiently. Moreover, I find it very interesting to browse different websites during my free time.

提案: 回答内容相关但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意语法准确性并使用连接词提升连贯性。

例: I guess it would be on a plane or a cruise. For example, once when we took a cruise from New York to the Bahamas, I couldn't connect to the Internet for a couple of days, which was quite challenging.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构较简单，建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I do think I spend too much time online, especially at work because I need to stay connected with my colleagues and keep updated. Besides work, I also spend a lot of time online for entertainment.

提案: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，但部分表达略显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

例: If I didn't have access to the Internet, I would definitely go out to play some sports, especially beginner games like pickleball or table tennis. Alternatively, if I stayed at home, I would spend time reading.

× I couldn't get connected to the Internet for couple of days and it can be very challenging.

✓ I couldn't get connected to the Internet for a couple of days and it can be very challenging.

“couple of days”前面缺少冠词“a”，正确表达是“a couple of days”，表示“一些天”。缺少冠词会导致表达不完整。