Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I started using the internet when I was a young child. It was very interesting and relaxing, so I really enjoyed those moments online.

提案: 回答时态混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I have been going online frequently since I was a teenager, and now I go online almost every day because it is common in modern society.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和动词形式，简洁表达原因，并使用连接词。

例: Yes, I remember that when I was a child, my parents often forbade me from using the internet because they thought it would affect my studies, which was very difficult for me.

提案: 存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的语法，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because nowadays, everyone needs to use the internet for work or study.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，内容重复且逻辑混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达想法，并避免无关内容。

例: Without the internet, I would spend my time doing activities like singing, dancing, painting, and reading, which I really enjoy.

× When I was a very little child, I started using the computer into into the Internet.

✓ When I was a very little child, I started using the computer to access the Internet.

句中 'using the computer into into the Internet' 结构不正确，应该用 'using the computer to access the Internet' 来表达使用电脑上网的意思。这里涉及动词后接介词短语的正确用法。

× I frequently go online when I was a teenager in the past and now I still it is.

✓ I frequently went online when I was a teenager in the past and now I still do.

句中 'go' 应该用过去时 'went' 来对应过去的时间状语 'when I was a teenager'，且 'now I still it is' 结构不正确，应该用 'now I still do' 来表达现在仍然经常上网。

× my parents often forbidden me to use the Internet because they think the Internet can could prevent my study.

✓ my parents often forbade me to use the Internet because they think the Internet could prevent my study.

'forbidden' 是过去分词，句中应使用动词过去式 'forbade'。此外，'can could' 是错误的重复，应只用 'could' 表示过去的可能性。

× Everyone must going online.

✓ Everyone must go online.

情态动词 'must' 后应接动词原形，不能接动名词 'going'。

× Everyone must spend their time going online because there they have to work or study these things on the Internet.

✓ Everyone must spend their time going online because they have to work or study these things on the Internet.

句中 'there' 多余且不合适，应删除。这里涉及介词和副词的正确使用。

× I think I would like to do some interesting things for without the Internet.

✓ I think I would like to do some interesting things without the Internet.

'for without the Internet' 结构不正确，'for' 应删除，直接用 'without the Internet' 表示没有互联网的情况下。

× I was very obsessed with reading very much in the past.

✓ I was very obsessed with reading in the past.

'very obsessed' 已经表达程度，'very much' 多余且重复，应删除。

× So I will pick up my Internet.

✓ So I will pick up reading again.

'pick up my Internet' 语义不通，应该表达重新开始某项活动，如 'reading'，这里涉及代词和名词搭配的正确使用。