Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些表达不够准确，如“search more information”应为“search for more information”。建议使用更地道的表达，并避免重复“when I was six years old”。

例: I started using the internet when I was six because my mother gave me a laptop as a gift. It helps me find information and play online games, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答直接且内容相关，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I go online almost every day, especially when I need to finish assignments before deadlines. I usually browse the internet to find important information and sometimes to relax.

提案: 回答没有直接回答问题，偏离了题意。建议直接回答被禁止使用互联网的经历，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, I remember when I was younger, my parents didn't allow me to use the internet during weekdays to make sure I focused on my studies.

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I do spend quite a lot of time online. Whenever I have free time, I usually scroll through TikTok or chat with friends on WeChat. Although it's relaxing, I sometimes worry that I spend too much time on these platforms.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“to enjoy to enjoy”和句子结尾不完整。建议注意语法准确性和句子完整性。

例: Without the internet, I would spend my time doing meaningful activities like reading great books or going outside to enjoy beautiful scenery. I believe that would be very fulfilling.

× This kind of game is beneficial for my intelligence.

✓ This kind of game is beneficial to my intelligence.

介词搭配错误，beneficial后应接介词to而非for，表示对某事有益。

× Well, without Internet I will spend my time on something meaningful or educational like reading some great books or just to go outside to enjoy to enjoy a beautiful scenery.

✓ Well, without the Internet I will spend my time on something meaningful or educational like reading some great books or just going outside to enjoy a beautiful scenery.

缺少定冠词the，Internet作为特指名词前需加the；动词形式错误，go outside后应接动名词形式going；重复使用to enjoy，应删除多余部分。

× I think that will have great.

✓ I think that will be great.

句子缺少系动词be，导致表达不完整，应补充be使句子完整。