Internet— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When did you start using the internet?
受験者
I started using the Internet when I was in Year 5, which is last year. I mainly use the Internet due to my increased debating studies and the increasing requirement for Internet platforms in school. For example, we use the Internet for reading and other exercises such as math.
試験官
How often do you go online?
受験者
I go online every day for different purposes. For example, I need to do my debate homework and I need to research a lot of evidence and data before I can start constructing my speech. I also go online for school. We have platforms for reading exercises and math exercises on school days.
試験官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
受験者
In some debating tournaments, we aren't allowed to use the Internet because this might give some people an advantage of using AI. To prevent these misuse of the Internet and different platforms, some competitions prohibits competitors to use any Internet platform or even Wi-Fi.
試験官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
受験者
I don't think I spend too much time online because I try to limit my time on the Internet. There are some harms to stay online, but when it is necessary, I still take out my phone or my computer and research information or data on the Internet.
試験官
What would you do without the internet?
受験者
Without the Internet, I might panic because a lot of studying requires the Internet right now. For example, in school we need to use Internet platforms to do math exercises, and in debate we need to use the Internet to research different kinds of information, but we can still use books.
評価
総合
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为完整，但表达略显重复，且“Year 5, which is last year”表述不够自然。建议简化时间表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的连接词。
例: I started using the Internet last year when I was in Year 5. Since then, I have mainly used it for my debating studies and schoolwork, such as reading and math exercises.
How often do you go online?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构较为重复，缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。
例: I go online every day for various reasons. For instance, I research evidence and data for my debate homework, and I also use online platforms for reading and math exercises during school days.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prohibits”应为“prohibit”，且表达略显复杂。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达。
例: During some debating tournaments, we are not allowed to use the Internet to prevent unfair advantages from AI. Therefore, these competitions prohibit the use of any Internet platforms or Wi-Fi.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达清晰，但部分句子结构不够自然，如“harms to stay online”。建议使用更地道的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I don't think I spend too much time online because I try to limit it. Although spending too much time online can be harmful, I only use my phone or computer to research information when necessary.
What would you do without the internet?
スコア: 78.0提案: 回答内容具体，但“might panic”表达略显夸张，且句子较长。建议简化表达，使用更自然的语气，并适当分句。
例: Without the Internet, I would feel a bit worried because many of my studies depend on it. For example, we use online platforms for math exercises and research in debate, but we can still rely on books.
文法
× some competitions prohibits competitors to use any Internet platform or even Wi-Fi.
✓ some competitions prohibit competitors from using any Internet platform or even Wi-Fi.
competitions 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 prohibit，而不是单数形式 prohibits。此外，动词后应使用介词短语 from using，而不是 to use。
× some competitions prohibits competitors to use any Internet platform or even Wi-Fi.
✓ some competitions prohibit competitors from using any Internet platform or even Wi-Fi.
动词 prohibit 后应接介词 from 加动名词形式，表示禁止做某事，不能用 to + 动词原形。
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