Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“meaningful doing search”表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when I was in high school. At that time, it was very useful for researching school projects and keeping in touch with my best friend through social media.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“I gone along”不正确，表达不清晰，建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达，同时避免冗余。

例: I go online several times a day for work and study. For example, I check my emails, read the news, and stay in touch with my friends through social media platforms like TikTok.

提案: 回答较完整，但句子略显重复，建议简化表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because they were worried that spending too much time online would affect my health and studies. Therefore, I had to limit my use of phones and computers.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议完整回答问题并注意语法和句子连贯性。

例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on social media. For example, I often find myself using my phone for hours, which sometimes negatively affects my sleep.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不完整，建议完整回答问题并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I think without the Internet, I would rely more on traditional ways of communication and information, such as reading books and newspapers, and talking face to face with people. It would definitely change how I access information and stay connected.

× At that time it was meaningful doing search for school projects and staying in touch with my best friend through social media.

✓ At that time it was meaningful to do searches for school projects and to stay in touch with my best friend through social media.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）时，语义不通顺，应使用不定式to do来表达目的或意义。此外，search应使用复数形式searches，因为指多个搜索。

× I gone along several times a day, meaningful work and study.

✓ I go online several times a day, mainly for work and study.

gone是go的过去分词，句子时态应为一般现在时，表示习惯性动作，应使用go。gone用法错误。

× I gone along several times a day, meaningful work and study.

✓ I go online several times a day, mainly for work and study.

短语go along用法不当，应使用go online表示上网。

× I use the Internet to check emails and also chat some news and stay in contact with my friends through social media like Tiktok.

✓ I use the Internet to check emails, chat about some news, and stay in contact with my friends through social media like TikTok.

chat后面应加介词about表示谈论某事，且news不可数，前面不加some。

× my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because my parents are quite worried that spending too much time online would affect my health and studies.

✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because they were quite worried that spending too much time online would affect my health and studies.

前半句是过去时，后半句描述当时的担忧，时态应保持一致，使用过去时were。

× I also finding I often find myself using my phones for hours which sometimes negative effects my sleep.

✓ I also find I often use my phone for hours, which sometimes negatively affects my sleep.

finding用法错误，应为find。negative是形容词，修饰动词affects应使用副词negatively。

× Because of this I am.

✓ Because of this, I am concerned about my health.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。应补充完整句子。

× I think without Internet I would probably depend more on traditional ways of communication and information chatting such as reading books, newspapers and talking face to face with people.

✓ I think without the Internet I would probably depend more on traditional ways of communication and information sharing such as reading books, newspapers, and talking face to face with people.

Internet前应加定冠词the；information后应使用sharing替代chatting，chatting用法不当。

× I think it's also.

✓ I think it's also important to stay connected in person.

句子缺少谓语和宾语，导致不完整，应补充完整表达。