Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的表达。

例: I started using the Internet when I was six years old. On my birthday, my mom gave me a computer, which made me very excited. Since then, I have enjoyed exploring anything I want to learn online.

提案: 回答内容简单且有语法错误，词汇使用不准确。建议丰富细节，使用正确的复数形式和更自然的表达。

例: I go online almost every day because it plays an important role in my life. I usually chat with my friends and search for information on various topics.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和逻辑不连贯。建议简化句子结构，明确表达原因和结果。

例: When I was in senior high school, my mom didn't allow me to use the Internet because she wanted me to focus on my studies. Therefore, I spent less time online during that period.

提案: 回答中有重复和未完成的句子，表达不完整。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并提供更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I spend about half of my day online because I like to keep up with the latest news and trends. Sometimes, I realize I spend too much time on social media, so I try to balance my online activities with other hobbies.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和表达不自然。建议注意时态一致和动词形式的正确使用。

例: Without the Internet, I usually chat with my friends face to face or cook something delicious. Cooking is my favorite hobby, so when I don't want to scroll on my phone, I choose to cook.

× I have the chance to explore the whatever I want to know.

✓ I have the chance to explore whatever I want to know.

句中“the whatever”使用错误，‘whatever’前不需要冠词‘the’，应直接使用‘explore whatever’。

× I can go online for chatting with my friend and search for informations.

✓ I can go online to chat with my friends and search for information.

‘for chatting’应改为不定式‘to chat’表示目的；‘my friend’应为复数‘my friends’；‘informations’是不可数名词，应为单数‘information’。

× She wanted me to focus on my study so I have real time to spend a lot of time on going online.

✓ She wanted me to focus on my studies so I had real time to spend a lot of time going online.

前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，‘have’应改为过去时‘had’；‘study’应为复数‘studies’；‘on going online’应改为‘going online’。

× I think I spend about half of my daily time online, maybe because I am interested in keeping in keeping up with the latest news and trends.

✓ I think I spend about half of my daily time online, maybe because I am interested in keeping up with the latest news and trends.

‘keeping in keeping up’重复，应去掉多余的‘in’。

× I try to balance with my.

✓ I try to balance my time.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，‘balance with my’不正确，应补全为‘I try to balance my time’。

× While without the Internet, I usually chat with my friends face to face or cook something delicious.

✓ Without the Internet, I usually chat with my friends face to face or cook something delicious.

‘While without the Internet’结构不正确，‘while’不应与‘without’连用，直接用‘Without the Internet’更合适。

× when I didn't want to scroll the phone, I choose to cooking.

✓ When I don't want to scroll on my phone, I choose to cook.

‘choose to cooking’错误，‘choose to’后应接动词原形‘cook’；‘didn't want’时态与上下文不符，应为一般现在时‘don't want’；‘scroll the phone’应为‘scroll on my phone’。