Internet— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When did you start using the internet?
受験者
I started to use the Internet maybe 12 years ago when I was in primary school and QQ was very popular at that time, so I have a QQ number account to chat with my friends.
試験官
How often do you go online?
受験者
Honestly, I go online every day because the Internet is very powerful and we can order some food and search some informations online. It's very helpful, so I use it every day.
試験官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
受験者
Yes, I could remember that my mom didn't allow me to use the computer when I was in primary school because she afraid me to play the computer games and influence my study.
試験官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
受験者
Yes, I do think I spend too much time online every day. I spend a lot of time browsing online apps and scrolling through social media, which I find quite addictive. Because these platforms are really attractive and constantly update, it's hard to stop.
試験官
What would you do without the internet?
受験者
Well, honestly, it's hard to imagine the life without Internet because the Internet is everywhere now. Without it, I might spend much more time completing my work manually, or I would probably go outside to enjoy nature or relax.
評価
総合
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“have a QQ number account”应为“had a QQ account”。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致。
例: I started using the Internet about 12 years ago when I was in primary school. At that time, QQ was very popular, so I had a QQ account to chat with my friends.
How often do you go online?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误，如“informations”应为“information”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并避免重复表达“every day”。
例: I go online every day because the Internet is very useful. For example, I can order food and search for information easily.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
スコア: 70.0提案: 句子中存在语法错误，如“she afraid me”应为“she was afraid that I would”。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，使句子更自然流畅。
例: Yes, I remember that my mom didn't allow me to use the computer when I was in primary school because she was afraid that playing computer games would affect my studies.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容丰富且连贯，但开头两句表达重复。建议合并句子，避免冗余，使表达更简洁自然。
例: Yes, I spend a lot of time online every day, browsing apps and scrolling through social media, which I find quite addictive because these platforms are attractive and constantly updated.
What would you do without the internet?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答较好，但“the life without Internet”应为“life without the Internet”。建议注意冠词使用，并尝试使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。
例: Honestly, it's hard to imagine life without the Internet because it is everywhere now. Without it, I might spend more time doing my work manually, or I would probably go outside to enjoy nature and relax.
文法
× she afraid me to play the computer games and influence my study.
✓ she was afraid that I would play computer games and it would influence my study.
这里动词 'afraid' 后面需要用完整的句子结构，不能直接接不定式。应使用 'was afraid that' 引导从句，表达害怕某事发生。原句中 'afraid me to play' 结构错误，应该改为 'was afraid that I would play'。
× search some informations online.
✓ search some information online.
'information' 是不可数名词，不能加复数形式 'informations'。应使用单数形式 'information'。
× I have a QQ number account to chat with my friends.
✓ I have a QQ account to chat with my friends.
'number account' 结构不正确，应该是 'QQ account'，'number' 在这里多余且错误。
× I could remember that my mom didn't allow me to use the computer when I was in primary school
✓ I remember that my mom didn't allow me to use the computer when I was in primary school
'could remember' 用法不当，表达过去记得某事时，通常用一般过去时 'remember' 即可，'could remember' 更强调能力，语境不符。
× it's hard to imagine the life without Internet because the Internet is everywhere now.
✓ it's hard to imagine life without the Internet because the Internet is everywhere now.
'life' 前不需要定冠词 'the'，除非特指某种生活。'Internet' 前需要加定冠词 'the'，因为 'the Internet' 是固定搭配。
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