Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但“meaning to watch cartoons and play computer games”表达不够地道，建议用更自然的表达方式，如“mainly to watch cartoons and play computer games”。

例: I started using the Internet when I was around 10 years old, mainly to watch cartoons and play computer games.

提案: 回答简洁明了，内容具体且自然。可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯，例如“usually to check messages, watch videos, or look up information.”

例: I go online several times a day, usually to check messages, watch videos, or look up information.

提案: 句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，“didn't allowed”应为“didn't allow”。建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, when I was about 11 years old, one day after school I wanted to play computer games, but my mom said I had to finish my homework first, so she didn't allow me to go online.

提案: 时态使用不一致，“played”应改为“play”。建议使用连接词使句子更自然。

例: Yes, sometimes I feel I spend too much time online, especially when I play computer games and lose track of time.

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富。可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Without the Internet, I think I would read more books, go outside more often, and maybe spend more time with my family.

× ...so she didn't allowed me to go online.

✓ ...so she didn't allow me to go online.

这里使用了助动词'did'，后面的动词应该用原形'allow'，而不是过去式'allowed'。在英语中，助动词'did'后面动词保持原形。