Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use past tense correctly and be more direct. For example, say "I started using the internet when I was 10 years old."

例: I started using the internet when I was 10 years old because my parents bought a computer for our home.

提案: Your answer is repetitive. Try to combine sentences and add more detail using linking words. For example, "I go online every day because I use the internet for studying and entertainment."

例: I go online every day because I use the internet for studying and entertainment, such as watching videos and chatting with friends.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Also, it does not directly answer the question about being 'not allowed'. Try to give a clear example and use correct grammar.

例: Yes, I remember once my parents did not allow me to use the internet because I had to focus on my exams.

提案: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Explain your opinion clearly and give reasons using linking words.

例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I feel bored without the internet, so I use it a lot to stay entertained.

提案: Your answer is short and repetitive. Try to give a fuller response with linking words and more details.

例: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend more time reading books because I enjoy learning new things that way.

× I think I will start using the Internet when I was 10 years old maybe.

✓ I think I started using the Internet when I was 10 years old.

The sentence incorrectly uses the future tense 'will start' to describe a past event. Since the time reference is 'when I was 10 years old,' the past tense 'started' should be used to match the time frame.

× Probably when the Internet went go down.

✓ Probably when the Internet went down.

The phrase 'went go down' is incorrect because 'went' is the past tense of 'go' and should not be followed by 'go' again. The correct past tense phrase is 'went down' to indicate the Internet stopped working.

× Yes I do, because maybe I can't without Internet.

✓ Yes, I do, because maybe I can't live without the Internet.

The sentence is missing a main verb after 'can't' to complete the meaning. Adding 'live' clarifies the inability. Also, 'the Internet' requires the definite article 'the' as it is a specific noun.