Internet— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When did you start using the internet?
受験者
Well, I remember I started using the Internet very early. It may be when I was a kid. At that time, my father took me a phone to provide the Internet for me to learn something new. So at that time I had to start using the Internet.
試験官
How often do you go online?
受験者
Well, it's actually every day, you know, it's more convenient to go online here because there's much social media going on like WeChat. It's more convenient for us to communicate with others and play with online.
試験官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
受験者
Well, it's memorable. Once I went to the school with my phone, but the school wasn't allowed us to pay the phone to the school. So at that time my parents knew that they are very they were very angry with me.
試験官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
受験者
Well, I think yes, actually I rely a lot on my phone, so I spend too much time to communicate with others in many apps like WeChat and usually play with games on my phone.
試験官
What would you do without the internet?
受験者
Well, actually I rely a lot on my phone. Without the Internet, it's very difficult for me to work. For example, I can't learn something new, but I would like to communicate with my parents and friends. Sometimes I will read more books in my daily life.
評価
総合
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达重复且不够简洁。建议用更自然流畅的表达方式，避免重复，并且句子结构更清晰。
例: I started using the internet when I was a child. My father gave me a phone so I could learn new things online.
How often do you go online?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有些语法错误和表达不够准确，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复“convenient”，并且注意句子完整性。
例: I go online every day because social media apps like WeChat make it easy to communicate and have fun.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，表达更准确。
例: I remember once I brought my phone to school, but phones were not allowed there. My parents were very angry when they found out.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中表达不够自然，语法有误。建议使用更地道的表达方式，注意动词搭配和句子流畅性。
例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I often use apps like WeChat to chat and play games on my phone.
What would you do without the internet?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答内容较好，但句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意句子结构的准确性。
例: I rely heavily on my phone, so without the internet, it would be hard to work or learn new things. However, I would spend more time talking with my family and reading books.
文法
× It's more convenient for us to communicate with others and play with online.
✓ It's more convenient for us to communicate with others and play online.
play后面不需要介词with，直接用play online表示“在线玩”。这里错误使用了介词with，属于动词+ing形式错误。
× Once I went to the school with my phone, but the school wasn't allowed us to pay the phone to the school.
✓ Once I went to school with my phone, but the school didn't allow us to bring the phone to school.
go to school前不需要加定冠词the，且动词allow后面应接宾语和动词原形，pay the phone是错误表达，应为bring the phone。这里涉及介词和动词用法错误。
× So at that time my parents knew that they are very they were very angry with me.
✓ So at that time my parents knew that they were very angry with me.
句子中时态应保持一致，既然是过去时态，后半句也应使用过去时were，而不是现在时are。
× I spend too much time to communicate with others in many apps like WeChat and usually play with games on my phone.
✓ I spend too much time communicating with others on many apps like WeChat and usually play games on my phone.
动词spend后应接动名词communicating而非不定式to communicate；play后不需要介词with，直接play games。介词使用错误。
× Without the Internet, it's very difficult for me to work. For example, I can't learn something new, but I would like to communicate with my parents and friends.
✓ Without the Internet, it's very difficult for me to work. For example, I can't learn anything new, but I would like to communicate with my parents and friends.
learn后面搭配anything new更合适，something new通常用于肯定句，否定句中用anything。这里是量词使用错误。
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