Internet— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
When did you start using the internet?
受験者
I started using the Internet in primary school. Especially great for because at that time my parents gave me a new computer.
試験官
How often do you go online?
受験者
Every day. I go online frequently because I need. To have access to knew information.
試験官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
受験者
Yes, I remember that when I was in middle school. A time when I needed to prepare for my final exams and I were not allowed to use the computer.
試験官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
受験者
Yes, I do. I think I'm addicted to the Internet because there are so many information and entertainments.
試験官
What would you do without the internet?
受験者
Without the Internet I will read some books and chat with my friends because I think. They are good ways to spend time and have fun.
評価
総合
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，缺少连接词，表达不自然。建议练习完整句子表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I started using the Internet when I was in primary school because my parents gave me a new computer at that time.
How often do you go online?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，词汇拼写错误（knew应为new）。建议注意句子完整性和拼写准确性。
例: I go online every day because I need to have access to new information.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
スコア: 60.0提案: 句子结构不完整，时态和主谓一致错误（I were应为I was），建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子表达。
例: Yes, I remember when I was in middle school, I was not allowed to use the computer because I needed to prepare for my final exams.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
スコア: 65.0提案: 表达较为清晰，但存在名词复数和不可数名词使用错误（information不可数，entertainments应为entertainment）。建议注意名词的单复数和不可数用法。
例: Yes, I do. I think I'm addicted to the Internet because there is so much information and entertainment available.
What would you do without the internet?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答基本完整，但句子断裂影响流畅性，建议使用连接词使表达更自然连贯。
例: Without the Internet, I would read some books and chat with my friends because I think these are good ways to spend time and have fun.
文法
× Especially great for because at that time my parents gave me a new computer.
✓ It was especially great because at that time my parents gave me a new computer.
原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使其成为一个完整的陈述句。
× I go online frequently because I need. To have access to knew information.
✓ I go online frequently because I need to have access to new information.
原句中断句错误，'I need.'后不应断开，且'knew'应为形容词'new'，表示新的信息。
× A time when I needed to prepare for my final exams and I were not allowed to use the computer.
✓ A time when I needed to prepare for my final exams and I was not allowed to use the computer.
主语'I'对应的过去式be动词应为'was'，而非'were'。
× I think I'm addicted to the Internet because there are so many information and entertainments.
✓ I think I'm addicted to the Internet because there is so much information and entertainment.
'information'和'entertainment'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，也不能用'many'，应使用'much'和单数形式。
× Without the Internet I will read some books and chat with my friends because I think. They are good ways to spend time and have fun.
✓ Without the Internet, I will read some books and chat with my friends because I think they are good ways to spend time and have fun.
原句中断句错误，'I think.'后不应断开，应连贯表达完整意思。
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