Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子直接回答问题，并用简单句子补充细节，避免无意义词汇。

例: I started using the internet when I was 12 years old. I mainly used it to contact my friends because it was a convenient way to communicate. My family members also enjoyed using the internet for news and entertainment.

提案: 回答内容混乱，缺乏连贯性和完整句子。建议直接回答问题，使用连接词组织句子，表达清楚上网频率和原因。

例: I go online every day because I am attached to my mobile phone. I often use the internet to keep in touch with my friends and get information.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子描述具体时间和原因，说明感受。

例: Yes, I remember one night I was not allowed to use the internet because I wanted to watch entertainment videos. My parents thought it was harmful because it made me sleep very late.

提案: 回答表达不清，句子不完整。建议直接表达观点，说明原因和影响，使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I always scroll my phone when I have free time. This affects my daily life, but I still maintain good relationships with my family and friends.

提案: 回答非常简短且无关，未回答问题。建议直接回答假设情况，说明没有网络时的活动。

例: Without the internet, I would spend more time reading books and doing outdoor activities like sports or meeting friends.

× I go to is when I was 12 years old.

✓ I started using it when I was 12 years old.

这里应该使用过去时态，因为动作发生在过去。原句中使用了现在时态go，时态错误。

× I normally. News I see kill.

✓ Normally, I see news online.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语和连贯性。需要调整句子结构，使其完整且通顺。

× To contact with my friends because it was a good way to communicate with others.

✓ To contact my friends because it was a good way to communicate with others.

动词contact后不需要介词with，去掉with更符合英语习惯。

× Lies by family members and my friends enjoyed it. Using.

✓ My family members and friends enjoyed using it.

原句语序混乱，缺少主谓宾结构，需调整为完整句子。

× I do a nice about tray away when I saw it done, but nowaday I always.

✓ I used to go out a lot when I was young, but nowadays I always stay at home.

原句表达不清，词语顺序和用词错误，需调整为正确的表达方式。

× I do a nice about tray away when I saw it done, but nowaday I always.

✓ I used to go out a lot when I was young, but nowadays I always stay at home.

原句中a nice about tray away无意义，需用正确的量词和表达。

× It is coming into contact. A friend over to well.

✓ I am in contact with my friends well.

原句介词使用错误，正确表达应为in contact with。

× Hey all night I've outside something yesterday night.

✓ Last night, I was outside all night.

描述过去发生的事情应使用过去时，且句子结构需调整。

× Because I'm. Want to watch the video about entertainment?

✓ Because I wanted to watch a video about entertainment.

句子不完整且时态错误，需用过去时并补全句子。

× Is a harmful format they need like I sleep very late.

✓ It is a harmful habit because I sleep very late.

原句中article使用错误，且表达不清，需改为正确的冠词和表达。

× Stop.

✓ I stopped.

单独使用stop不完整，需用过去时态并补全句子。

× I think I put my time in Internet because I'm.

✓ I think I spend too much time on the Internet because I am addicted.

原句中量词和介词使用错误，需用正确的表达方式。

× I always scroll my phone when I want to free.

✓ I always scroll on my phone when I have free time.

scroll后应加介词on，且表达free time更准确。

× Is a fat hour.

✓ It takes a lot of time.

原句表达不清，需用正确的量词和表达。

× My daily life, right?

✓ This affects my daily life, right?

原句缺少谓语，句子不完整，需补全。

× I'm OK with my family and friends. Very often.

✓ I often get along well with my family and friends.

原句副词位置错误，且表达不完整，需调整。

× I like browsing the Internet. The right side.

✓ I like browsing the Internet in my free time.

原句后半部分无意义，需补全句子使其完整。