Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I usually watch movies once a week”), avoid unclear phrases like “laser time,” and give one or two specific details using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences.

例: I usually watch movies once a week, typically on weekends when I have free time. I prefer East Asian dramas, especially Korean and Taiwanese series, because I enjoy their emotional stories and strong character development.

提案: Open with a direct topic sentence naming the types you watch, then add specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid repetition (don't repeat “K drama” three times) and correct grammar (use present simple: “I watch”).

例: I usually watch Korean dramas and romantic comedies. I enjoy Korean dramas because their plots are unpredictable and the characters are well developed, so I find the stories both exciting and emotionally engaging.

提案: Give a clear preference sentence, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid unclear words like “dietary” and use correct collocations (e.g. “prefer the cinema for big-screen experiences”). Use linking words such as “because” or “however.”

例: I prefer going to the cinema for big-screen films, because IMAX and 3D movies look much more impressive in a theatre. However, for casual or older films I usually watch at home for comfort and convenience.

提案: Begin with a direct opinion (Yes or No) and then support it with one or two clear reasons and an example. Use correct grammar (e.g. “watching movies helps improve language skills”) and avoid vague phrases like “another's language that exists in the world.”

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it improves listening skills and exposes you to natural expressions. For example, watching Korean dramas with subtitles helped me learn everyday phrases and improved my pronunciation.

× I am watching movie weekly because in a weekend when I am in a holiday, I think that my laser time is too special.

✓ I watch movies weekly because on weekends when I am on holiday, I think that my leisure time is very special.

The original uses present continuous 'I am watching' for a habitual action; use simple present 'I watch'. 'movie' should be plural 'movies' for general reference (singular/plural issue but corrected as part of tense). Use the preposition 'on weekends' and 'on holiday'. 'laser time' is likely a typo for 'leisure time'. Also use 'very' instead of 'too' to convey positive meaning. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct prepositions and noun forms.

× When I'm watching movies, I like Korean drama, Taiwan drama and Hong Kong drama.

✓ When I watch movies, I like Korean dramas, Taiwanese dramas and Hong Kong dramas.

Habitual actions should use simple present 'I watch' rather than present continuous. Use plural 'dramas' when speaking generally. Use adjective forms: 'Taiwanese dramas' rather than 'Taiwan drama'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct adjective/noun forms.

× I am frequently watching Korean drama movie because I'm so excited with the stories of the K drama and also I really like the plot of the K drama.

✓ I frequently watch Korean drama movies because I am very excited by the stories of K-dramas and I also really like their plots.

For habitual frequency use simple present 'I frequently watch'. Use plural 'movies' and 'K-dramas' for general reference. Use 'excited by' instead of 'excited with' to indicate the cause of excitement. Replace 'the plot of the K drama' with 'their plots' to match plural noun. Suggestion: use simple present for routines, correct prepositions and plural forms.

× It's challenges for me too.

✓ They are challenging for me, too.

The original mixes noun 'challenges' with 'it's'. To describe the experience use the adjective 'challenging' and match plural subject with 'They are'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct adjective form to describe something.

× I prefer to the cinema when I think that there is the movie that I would like to really watch dietary and for the spatial film that can play in IMAX like 3D film or animation.

✓ I prefer the cinema when there is a movie I really want to watch in person, and for special films that are shown in IMAX, such as 3D films or animations.

Do not use 'prefer to the cinema'; use 'prefer the cinema' or 'prefer going to the cinema'. Use 'a movie I really want to watch in person' instead of 'would like to really watch dietary' (typo). 'Spatial film' is incorrect; use 'special films' and 'shown in IMAX'. Also pluralize 'films' and 'animations' as needed. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('prefer the cinema', 'shown in IMAX') and fix typos.

× Especially because I'm serious to learn about new language such as Korean English, Watching movie is the way to enhance our capability to knows about another's language that exists in the world.

✓ Especially because I am serious about learning new languages such as Korean and English, watching movies is a way to improve our ability to learn about other languages in the world.

Use 'serious about learning' rather than 'serious to learn'. 'New languages' should be plural and list languages separately. 'Watching' should be lowercase in the middle of the sentence. Use 'a way to improve our ability to learn' instead of 'the way to enhance our capability to knows'. 'Another's language' is incorrect; use 'other languages'. Suggestion: use correct verb + preposition ('serious about'), plural nouns, correct verb forms, and clearer phrasing.