Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words like 'usually' or 'sometimes'.

例: I usually watch movies about three times a week during the summer, but sometimes I watch them every day depending on my plans.

提案: Provide a more structured answer by starting with a topic sentence and then giving specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I usually watch various genres of movies, such as romance, fantasy, and comedy, because I enjoy different types of stories.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by combining sentences and using linking words to make it more fluent and natural. Also, avoid repeating the same idea.

例: I prefer watching movies at home because it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, although I sometimes go to the cinema with my friends.

提案: Good answer with personal experience. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and correct minor grammatical errors for better fluency.

例: From my experience, watching movies in other languages is very useful because I learned most of my English from movies and series; I usually watch them without subtitles, which has helped me become more fluent.

× I watched movie in my free time

✓ I watched movies in my free time

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to multiple instances of watching films during free time, not just one.

× so it's made me more fluent in the language

✓ so it has made me more fluent in the language

The phrase 'it's made' is a contraction of 'it is made', which is incorrect here. The correct form is the present perfect 'it has made' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present.