Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Risposta generalmente naturale e chiara, ma presenta ripetizioni e qualche esitazione lessicale. Migliora la struttura iniziando con una frase tematica diretta, poi aggiungi un esempio specifico usando connettori (ad esempio "for instance" o "for example"). Evita ripetizioni come "remembering numbers" e "dates" vicine; usa parole diverse per varietà lessicale.

例: Yes. I'm good at remembering numbers, especially birthdays and important dates. For instance, when I studied history at school I could always recall the exact years of major events, which helped me in exams.

提案: Buona risposta informativa ma con errori di scelta lessicale e grammaticale che rendono la frase meno naturale (ad esempio "narrow space engineer" non è chiaro). Migliora la precisione del lessico professionale, usa frasi più concise e collega le idee con connettori come "both... and..." correttamente. Correggi anche l'ordine delle parole e articoli.

例: Yes, I already use many numbers in my current job as a spacecraft engineer. Both at university and now I perform calculations and run simulations, particularly related to aerodynamics in the aerospace field.

提案: Risposta sincera ma troppo disfluente (troppi "umm" e pause) e con lessico impreciso ("first classificated", "pants or pants"). Riduci esitazioni, usa vocaboli corretti e fornisci un dettaglio specifico collegato connettori come "for example" o "in fact". Mantieni massimo 3-4 frasi concise.

例: Yes, I loved maths as a child; it was my favourite subject. For example, we had multiplication table competitions and I usually finished first or second, and sometimes won small prizes like books or stationery.

提案: Risposta personale e interessante ma con esitazioni e qualche piccolo errore grammaticale ("the first number I wear"). Sii più naturale eliminando "umm" e correggi verbi e tempi. Usa connettori per spiegare relazione e motivo (ad esempio "because", "also").

例: A few numbers are meaningful to me: 28 and 98 are linked to my birthdays, and 8 is my favourite number. I chose 8 when I first played football and have kept using it ever since.

× Yes, I'm really good at remembering numbers and particular birthdays of my family and my friends and also the dates.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at remembering numbers, particular birthdays of my family and friends, and other important dates.

The original sentence has awkward word order and redundant conjunctions. Combine related items with commas and use 'other important dates' for clarity. Keep present simple/continuous as appropriate for ability (I'm good at remembering).

× For example, when I used to study history at school, I always remember the years of the of what was happening.

✓ For example, when I studied history at school, I always remembered the years of what was happening.

Mixing 'used to' with 'always remember' creates tense inconsistency. Use past tense consistently for habitual past actions: 'when I studied' and 'I always remembered.' Remove extra 'of the of.'

× I actually use a lot numbers in my current job since I'm a narrow space engineer.

✓ I actually use a lot of numbers in my current job since I'm a narrow space engineer.

Missing preposition 'of' after 'a lot' (quantifier issue). Also 'narrow space engineer' may be a word choice error but grammatically add 'of.'

× So both during the university and now in my current job I do many calculations and simulations, in particular in the field of aeronautic aerodynamics.

✓ So both during university and now in my current job I do many calculations and simulations, particularly in the field of aeronautical aerodynamics.

Use 'during university' (no 'the') and 'particularly' is the correct adverb. 'Aeronautic aerodynamics' is redundant; use 'aeronautical aerodynamics.'

× Did you enjoy studying math as a child?

✓ Did you enjoy studying math as a child?

Question sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× And umm, we used to do some, umm, competition of, uh, multiplication tables and I was always, uh, the first classificated or the second.

✓ And we used to take part in multiplication table competitions, and I was always the first or second.

'Competition of multiplication tables' is incorrect prepositional structure; use 'competitions' and 'take part in.' 'Classificated' is not English; use 'first or second.' Maintain past habitual 'used to.'

× And I used to win some prizes like pants or pants.

✓ And I used to win some prizes like shirts or pants.

Repeating 'pants' is an error; list distinct prize items. This is a lexical choice rather than grammatical but correct the noun list for clarity.

× So, umm, some numbers are really important for me like the 28 and the 98 because, uh, they are related to my birthday, but also the number 8 itself.

✓ Some numbers are really important to me, like 28 and 98, because they are related to my birthday, and also the number 8 itself is important to me.

Use 'important to me' not 'for me.' Remove unnecessary 'the' before numbers and make sentence flow clearer. Keep present tense for general facts.

× It's my favorite number because, umm, it was uh, the first number I wear as a football player and I keep choosing that number.

✓ It's my favorite number because it was the first number I wore as a football player, and I keep choosing that number.

Tense inconsistency: 'was' indicates past so 'wear' should be 'wore' (past). 'Keep choosing' is acceptable for ongoing habit. Remove filler words for clarity.