T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be natural and concise: correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid redundancy, and add one clear reason with linking words. Limit to max 3–4 short sentences. For example, say how often, then one or two specific reasons with a linking word.

例: I wear T-shirts every weekend because they are comfortable and let me move around easily. Also, they are cheaper than many other types of clothes, so I can buy several without spending much.

提案: Fix vocabulary and grammar and be specific about frequency and reason. Use linking words to connect ideas (because/so). State accurate timeframes and durable expectations. Keep under 4 sentences.

例: I usually buy T-shirts once a month because I prefer higher-quality ones. Because they last two to three months with regular wear, I don’t need to replace them too often.

提案: Complete your sentence and give a clear reason with specific details. Use linking words (instead, because, therefore). Give a short comparison and an example about climate or cultural norms. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

例: Older people in my country rarely wear T-shirts; instead, they usually prefer blouses or shirts. This is partly because of cultural norms and because the climate can be hot and humid, so lightweight blouses are more common.

提案: Correct vocabulary errors and make the sequence clear: state past habit, then reasons with linking words. Use one or two specific supporting details (how many, how often). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. My parents often bought me many T-shirts and shorts because they were durable and easy to wash, so I wore them almost every day when I was a child.

× I wear it every weekends because I feel that wearing T-shirts can make me move around easier.

✓ I wear them every weekend because I feel that wearing T-shirts makes it easier for me to move around.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'T-shirts'; use 'them' (plural). 'Every weekends' is wrong; use singular 'every weekend'. Use 'makes' to agree with singular noun 'wearing T-shirts' as a single activity, and rephrase 'make me move around easier' to 'makes it easier for me to move around' for natural word order and clarity.

× Besides that, the price of T-shirts is quite cheaper than other.

✓ Besides that, the price of T-shirts is much cheaper than others.

'Quite cheaper' is unidiomatic; use 'much cheaper' or 'considerably cheaper'. 'Other' as a noun is incorrect; use 'others' or 'other types of clothing'. Also prefer plural 'T-shirts' price compared to others.

× I buy teachers once a month because I usually buy a high quality one, so the T-shirts usually use for two to three months.

✓ I buy T-shirts once a month because I usually buy a high-quality one, so the T-shirts usually last for two to three months.

The student wrote 'teachers' instead of 'T-shirts' (likely a typo) and mixed singular/plural. 'A high quality one' needs a hyphen 'high-quality' when used as a compound adjective. 'Use for' is incorrect; 'last for' expresses duration. Ensure consistency: 'I buy T-shirts' and 'a high-quality one' refer to plural vs singular correctly.

× Actually, my older people in my country don't wear T-shirts.

✓ Actually, older people in my country don't wear T-shirts.

'My older people' is awkward and incorrect; use 'older people' or 'older people in my country'. The possessive 'my' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here.

× Instead there they usually wear blouses.

✓ Instead, they usually wear blouses there.

Word order is awkward. Place adverb 'there' at end for natural English: 'they usually wear blouses there.' Also add a comma after 'Instead'.

× I think because of our climate and.

✓ I think it is because of our climate and culture.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause and object after 'and.' Add a noun like 'culture' or complete the thought: 'I think it is because of our climate and culture.' Include 'it is' for a complete clause.

× Definitely. My parents usually bought me many teachers and shorts.

✓ Definitely. My parents usually bought me many T-shirts and shorts.

Again 'teachers' is a typo for 'T-shirts.' 'Usually bought' is past habitual and acceptable if referring to childhood; keep past tense. Correct the noun to 'T-shirts.'

× They told me that they are quite durable and easy to maintain, so I usually had both of them.

✓ They told me that they were quite durable and easy to maintain, so I usually had both of them.

When reporting past speech, use past tense 'were' instead of 'are.' 'So I usually had both of them' is acceptable but sounds slightly odd; better: 'so I usually had both' or 'so I usually owned both.' Ensure tense consistency.