Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu độ tự nhiên và cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh những cụm từ như “I don't care” nếu không chính xác về cảm xúc, và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai đã giúp bạn, bạn có đi bộ hay đi xe buýt, hay cảm nhận về việc không có xe đạp). Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn độ dài không quá 5 câu.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked or took the bus to school. Occasionally a neighbour would let me ride theirs, which I enjoyed. Because of that, I didn't learn to ride until I was older.

提案: Câu trả lời hiện tại bị lộn xộn, có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “he's not purple eye”). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu quan điểm rõ ràng và đưa lý do cụ thể, kèm theo ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Dùng liên từ như “because”, “however” để kết nối ý, và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Bicycles are not as popular as motorbikes in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more practical for commuting in heavy traffic. However, bicycles are becoming more common in parks and among people who exercise or want to save money.

× I think he's not purple eye in my country because the motorbike motorcycle is very popular in my country.

✓ I think they are not popular in my country because motorcycles are very popular.

The student used 'he's' and 'purple eye' incorrectly. Use 'they' to refer to 'bicycles/bikes' (plural) and 'popular' as adjective. Also 'motorbike motorcycle' is redundant; use 'motorcycles'. Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and correct word choice. Suggestion: replace incorrect pronoun 'he's' with 'they', correct 'purple eye' to 'popular', and use 'motorcycles'.

× Country because it's convenient and faster than bike.

✓ This is because they are convenient and faster than bikes.

Sentence fragment 'Country because...' lacks proper subject and is ungrammatical. Use 'this is because' to connect ideas and 'they' to refer to motorcycles. Use plural 'bikes' for comparison. Suggestion: start with a connector ('This is because') and ensure subject-pronoun agreement and plural nouns for general statements.