Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1, respond directly with a short topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends. Because it was lightweight and had training wheels at first, I learned to ride quickly, so I became quite confident on the road.

提案: Good content and clear reasons, but the answer is slightly long and has a few inaccuracies (cars and motorbikes are more expensive than bikes, not the other way). Improve coherence by using linking words and more precise vocabulary, and keep sentences concise (max 5). Add a brief concrete example or contrast to strengthen the point.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Mainly, many people prefer bicycles because they are affordable and eco-friendly, and they do not require fuel. For example, in my city many students and market vendors cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country and it's because many people don't have the means to afford a vehicle like bikes and motorbikes and cars, so they often steer towards buying bicycles since they're eco friendly, don't require fuel and can take you anywhere.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country because many people cannot afford motor vehicles, so they often choose bicycles since they are eco-friendly, do not require fuel, and can take you many places.

Multiple issues: sentence is wordy and contains informal contractions and repetitive terms causing poor sentence structure (Grammar problem type ID 26). Use 'bicycles' for consistency instead of switching between 'bikes' and 'bicycles'. Replace 'don't have the means to afford a vehicle like bikes and motorbikes and cars' with a concise phrase 'cannot afford motor vehicles'. Use full forms 'cannot' and 'do not' in formal responses. Add hyphen in 'eco-friendly'. Use parallel structure in the list: 'are eco-friendly, do not require fuel, and can take you many places.' Suggestion: simplify long sentences, keep consistent nouns, use parallel items, and avoid informal contractions in test responses.