Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Şu hatalara dikkat edin: geçmiş zaman kullanımı tutarlı değil (should use past simple), çekim hataları (have → had, buys → bought), cümleler bağlayıcılarla düzenlenmeli ve daha fazla özgün ayrıntı eklenmeli. Maksimum 3-4 kısa cümle kullanın, örneğin yaş, kim verdi, ne amaçla kullandığınız ve kısa bir anı ekleyin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was 13, and I often used it to get to school. I also enjoyed riding it on weekends with friends, which was a lot of fun.

提案: Cevap daha açık ve özgün örneklerle desteklenmeli. Dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin (they use → people use / they are used; 'recycled devices' yanlış anlam yaratıyor). Bağlaçlar kullanarak neden popüler olduklarını, kimlerin kullandığını ve bir örnek ekleyin. Kısa ve öz 2-3 cümle yeterli olacaktır.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting and there are also local races and cycling clubs. They are popular because they are cheap, environmentally friendly and good for exercise.

× Yes I have when I was 13.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was 13.

The student uses 'have' (present) but the time reference 'when I was 13' requires past tense. Use the simple past 'had'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions (use past for completed past events).

× My dad buys me one and I use it for travel.

✓ My dad bought me one and I used it for traveling.

The verbs 'buys' and 'use' are in present tense while the context is past (childhood). Change to simple past 'bought' and 'used'. Also 'for travel' is better as the gerund 'for traveling' or 'to travel'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use gerund after 'for'.

× Yes they are.

✓ Yes, they are.

This sentence is acceptable but needs a comma after 'Yes' for natural written English. No tense change required. Suggestion: include punctuation for clarity.

× In my country they use for the races and this is so good 'cause bikes are recycled devices.

✓ In my country, people use them for races, and this is good because bicycles are recyclable.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'people' and pronoun 'them' to refer to bikes; 'use for the races' should be 'use them for races'; colloquial ''cause' should be 'because'; 'bikes are recycled devices' is awkward — 'bicycles are recyclable' is more natural. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: include explicit subject/pronoun, use 'recyclable' for the adjective, and avoid informal contractions in formal responses.