Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng có lỗi ngữ âm/đánh vần (buy → bike) và thiếu chi tiết. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, khi nào, bạn đã làm gì với chiếc xe). Sử dụng liên từ nếu cần để kết nối ý (for example, because, so). Hạn chế không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park near our house every afternoon. For example, I often practised tricks with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: Câu trả lời không phù hợp và không trả lời câu hỏi. Cần bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/It depends), sau đó giải thích với lý do cụ thể, ví dụ so sánh thành thị và nông thôn, đề cập vào phương tiện thay thế hoặc thói quen đi lại. Dùng liên từ để liên kết lí do (because, however, for example). Giữ 2–3 câu bổ trợ tối đa.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities and rural areas because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. However, in big cities many people prefer motorcycles or cars due to longer distances and traffic. For example, students often cycle to school, while office workers usually commute by public transport.

× Yes, I had a buy when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the wrong word 'buy' instead of 'bike'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error rather than a grammatical form listed exactly in the provided list; it most closely affects sentence meaning and is corrected to the intended noun. Suggestion: check similar-sounding words and proofread for typos; practice minimal pairs and context to choose correct vocabulary.

× The app.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

'The app.' is a fragment and does not answer the examiner's question. The response must be a complete sentence addressing popularity. Suggestion: Form a full sentence that directly answers the question, for example starting with 'Yes' or 'No' followed by a reason: 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.'