Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use correct tense and add a brief reason or detail. You should answer in past tense for childhood, e.g., 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Then optionally add one or two supporting details (one or two short sentences) explaining why or what you used instead. Keep it natural and concise.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took public transport.

提案: Organize your ideas and remove hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, support it with specific reasons and an example, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid filler words (uh, umm). Aim for 2–3 sentences that give clear reasons (e.g., affordability, convenience) and a brief personal example.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school, and I also own a simple bicycle that I use for local errands.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' This requires a past-tense response. 'Do not have' is present tense and does not match the past question. Use the past auxiliary 'did' plus base verb 'have' -> 'I didn't (have one)'. Alternatively, 'No, I didn't have one.' is more complete.

× Yeah uh, I think, uh, because umm every, every people have bikes and they are using bikes to go office hospital umm, uh, school like uh money than our I have also a cycle like that is like just like a.

✓ Yes. I think so because almost everyone has a bike and people use bikes to go to the office, the hospital, and school. I also have a bicycle like that.

Multiple issues: 'every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone' or 'every person' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 12). 'People have' requires third-person plural agreement which 'have' is fine, but 'every people have' is wrong because 'every' takes a singular noun (Grammar Problem Type 1). Missing prepositions: 'go office hospital' should be 'go to the office, the hospital' (Grammar Problem Type 11). Article omission: include 'the' before specific places (Grammar Problem Type 17/22). Fragmented, run-on, and unclear phrase 'like uh money than our I have also a cycle like that is like just like a' shows sentence structure errors and repetition (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggested corrections simplify and use correct pronouns, pluralization, prepositions, and articles: 'almost everyone has a bike and people use bikes to go to the office, the hospital, and school. I also have a bicycle like that.' For improvement, practice using 'everyone' vs 'people', include 'to' after 'go', and use articles ('the') before specific places.