Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and use correct verb forms (e.g., "didn't have", "learned").

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family was middle class and could not buy one for me. However, I taught myself to ride when I was 21, and now I have a driving license.

提案: Answer directly, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Improve sentence structure and vocabulary (use "motorbikes" or "motorcycles" consistently). Mention concrete examples or comparisons and avoid filler words like "umm".

例: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in India, especially in Chennai, Tamil Nadu. For example, many people prefer bikes over cars because they are cheaper and easier to park, and there is a strong culture of motorcycle racing and commuting by two-wheelers.

× No I don't have a bike when I was a child because I was in a normal middle class family so they they didn't give me any scooters or a bike and after 21 only I learned to ride bikes on my own and I do have license now.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was from a normal middle-class family, so they didn't give me any scooters or a bike. I only learned to ride bikes on my own after I was 21, and I have a license now.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past timeframe. Other issues fixed while staying within allowed problem types: added commas for clarity, corrected 'middle class' to 'middle-class' (compound adjective) and reordered 'after 21 only' to 'only...after I was 21' for natural word order. Also changed 'I do have license now' to 'I have a license now' to use correct present simple and include the article 'a'. Suggested improvement: ensure verb tense matches the time reference (use past tense for events in the past) and include appropriate articles and natural word order.

× S bikes are popular in our country umm I stay in India Tamil Nadu in main city Chennai.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country. I live in Chennai, the capital city of Tamil Nadu, India.

The original started with 'S bikes' which seems to be a typo; 'Bikes' is correct. 'I stay in India Tamil Nadu in main city Chennai' is ungrammatical and missing articles and proper word order. Use 'I live in Chennai, the capital city of Tamil Nadu, India' to present location clearly and include the definite article 'the' before 'capital city.' Suggested improvement: avoid filler sounds like 'umm' in formal responses, use 'live' for residence, and include necessary articles for nouns.

× Here people ride bikes are more than cars umm they also do motorcycle racing.

✓ Here, more people ride bikes than cars, and they also do motorcycle racing.

The clause 'people ride bikes are more than cars' is incorrect in structure and subject-verb agreement. The correct comparative structure is 'more people ride bikes than cars.' Added a conjunction and comma to join the two ideas: 'and they also do motorcycle racing.' Suggested improvement: use the comparative pattern 'more + noun + verb than + noun' to compare two groups, and keep sentence structure simple and parallel.