Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, grammatically correct, and directly answer the question with clear tense use. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), use past tense consistently when talking about childhood, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, so) correctly.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn’t enjoy riding. As a result, I never learned to ride, and even now I prefer walking or taking public transport.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific, grammatically correct examples. Use present simple for general statements and provide concrete observations or reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid vague phrases. Keep answers natural and limit to 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see many people commuting by bicycle or scooter in the mornings and evenings because it is cheap and convenient in crowded city areas.

× When I was a child I didn't have any bicycle because I don't like riding a bike.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bicycle because I didn't like riding a bike.

The noun 'bicycle' should be singular with the article 'a' when referring to one item: 'a bicycle'. Also the second clause refers to past preference, so the verb should be past tense 'didn't like' to match 'When I was a child'. Suggestion: Use 'a bicycle' for a single bike and keep past tense consistently: 'didn't like'.

× Also I can't ride bike now and that's why I don't have bike when I was children.

✓ Also I can't ride a bike now, and that's why I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Multiple problems: 'can't ride bike' needs the article 'a' before 'bike'. The clause 'when I was children' uses incorrect pronoun and number; it should be 'when I was a child' (singular). The time reference is past, so 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to match past context. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use correct articles and singular form: 'a bike' and 'a child'.

× I think it's popular in my country because when I go outside I always saw people was riding bike and in the back or basic touch people always ride bicycle or scooter or like that things.

✓ I think they are popular in my country because when I go outside I often see people riding bikes, and in the suburbs people often ride bicycles or scooters or similar things.

Several tense and agreement errors: 'it's popular' should be 'they are popular' to agree with plural 'bikes'. 'I always saw' mixes past 'saw' with present habit; use present simple 'see'. 'People was' is incorrect; use plural verb 'were' in past or 'are'/'ride' in present; here present progressive 'riding' is fine without 'was'. 'Riding bike' needs plural 'bikes' or article; better 'riding bikes'. 'In the back or basic touch' is unclear; likely intended 'in the suburbs' or 'in the back streets'—I used 'in the suburbs'. 'Always ride bicycle or scooter' needs plural forms and parallel structure: 'ride bicycles or scooters'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement, consistent present tense for habits, plural nouns for general references, and clear location phrases.