Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答太简短，缺乏细节与支撑句。建议用主题句直接回答后，补充一到两句具体细节，例如什么时候得到自行车、骑车的频率、与谁一起骑或一次难忘的经历，同时使用衔接词使句子连贯。保持不超过五句。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight and rode it almost every day after school. I often rode with my friends around the neighborhood, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: 回答过于简练，缺少原因和具体例子。建议先给出明确立场，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，例如城市中自行车道增多、绿色出行的趋势或上下班骑行的人数变化，并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。总长度控制在五句内。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular because many people use them for short commutes and shopping. For example, recent bike-sharing schemes in big cities have made cycling more convenient and widespread.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该回答与上文问题 “Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 时态和结构一致，没有语法错误。无需修改。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

该回答与上文问题 “Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 时态和结构一致，没有语法错误。无需修改。