Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate, avoid repetition, and give a slightly longer, natural response with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and one linking word if adding detail. For example, begin with a direct statement, then add a brief reason or memory.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house almost every day, and it helped me feel independent.

提案: Answer directly, correct singular/plural errors, and expand with one specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., because or for example). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and natural-sounding by avoiding fillers like “uh.”

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, you can see many cyclists on city bike lanes during rush hour.

× Yes, yes, I have a bike when when I was a child.

✓ Yes, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present simple 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. This is a tense error: use past simple 'had' to match the past time. Also remove duplicated 'when'. Suggestion: use past tense for events that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my countries. Uh.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

The student used plural 'countries' but the context refers to a single country (the student's country). This is a singular/plural error. Use singular 'country' when speaking about the nation the speaker comes from. Suggestion: check whether you mean one country or multiple countries and match noun number accordingly.