Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You misunderstood the examiner's question and responded with an incorrect word. Focus on listening carefully and answering directly. Begin with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, which my parents bought for me when I was six. Because I rode it to school and the park almost every day, I got very confident and independent.

提案: Here you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Always start by giving a clear opinion (e.g., Yes/No/It depends). Then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheaper and avoid traffic, and recently the government has added bike lanes to promote cycling.

× Did you have advice when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student's answer uses the noun 'advice' which is uncountable and means guidance, not a physical object. The examiner's question asks about possessing a 'bike' as a child. This is a vocabulary/word choice error that makes the sentence nonsensical in context. According to the provided problem type list, this fits a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: replace 'advice' with the correct countable noun 'a bike' to match the question; ensure the article 'a' is used with singular countable nouns.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's sentence exactly repeats the examiner's question and is grammatically correct. It uses plural 'bikes' appropriately and present simple 'are' to ask about general truth. No correction is needed. According to the problem type list, no applicable error type applies, so no change is required.