Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You misunderstood the examiner's question and repeated it in the wrong tense. Answer directly with a short, natural response (1–3 sentences). Use correct tense for past experiences, give a brief detail, and avoid repeating the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one specific supporting detail (where you rode it or who gave it to you).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was six, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Your answer has useful ideas but contains many hesitations, vocabulary errors, and unclear phrasing. Organize your reply: start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Pronunciation and word choice matter—use 'bikes' (not 'bites' or 'by'), 'popular' and 'common', and avoid unnecessary fillers. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. Focus on clarity and specific examples (e.g., commuting to work, narrow streets).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. Also, our cities have narrow streets and limited public transport, so bicycles are often the most convenient and affordable option.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The examiner's question is in the past tense asking about childhood, so the student should use past tense 'Did you have' rather than present 'Do you have'. This is a tense error (Past tense issue) and also a sentence structure error because 'when you were a child' requires a past-tense auxiliary. Suggestion: use 'Did' + subject + base verb for past simple questions about past time.

× I think bites are a problem in my country because mostly, uh, we used to commute, uh, transportation, especially bike and uh, because we have a small boat. So uh, by is one of the most convenient transportation that we use.

✓ I think bikes are common in my country because we mostly use them for commuting. Bikes are one of the most convenient forms of transportation for us, especially because we have narrow roads.

This sentence has multiple errors that map to the provided list: incorrect word choice ('bites' should be 'bikes'), verb form and tense/structure issues ('we used to commute, uh, transportation' is ungrammatical), article/quantifier and noun form issues ('transportation' countability and 'by' is incorrect). The main problems are: 1) wrong word 'bites' (phonetic mistake) — use 'bikes'; 2) awkward phrase 'we used to commute, uh, transportation' — use 'we mostly use them for commuting' (present simple for habitual action); 3) 'by is one of the most convenient transportation' — 'Bikes are one of the most convenient forms of transportation' (plural subject and correct noun phrase). Suggestion: clearly choose correct lexical items, use present simple for habitual actions (we mostly use), match plural subject and verb ('bikes are'), and use 'form(s) of transportation' for countability. Keep sentences shorter and check each clause for subject-verb agreement.