Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有直接回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题。要直接给出简短的主题句，然后用一到两句补充细节。例如说明是否有自行车、什么时候得到的、是否经常骑、你对它的感受等。注意回答长度不超过5句并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six, and I rode it almost every afternoon after school. Because it was a small red bicycle with training wheels, my parents felt it was very safe. As I grew older I upgraded to a bigger bike and started cycling with friends on weekends.

提案: 你再次只是复述了考官的问题，没有提供任何信息。应直接表明你的观点，然后用具体理由或例子支持你的看法，比如通勤习惯、城市基础设施或不同群体的喜好。使用连接词如'because'、'for example'来组织句子，保持自然简练。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in large cities, because many people use them for short commutes to avoid traffic. For example, bike-sharing schemes have become widespread and you can see commuters and students cycling during rush hours.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句为一般过去时的正确问句，结构完整（助动词 did + 主语 + 动词原形），时态与情境相符，无需修改。

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句为一般现在时的正确问句，结构完整（助动词 do + 主语 + 动词原形），同时主句中形容词 popular 正确修饰复数名词 bikes，语法无误，无需修改。