Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student did not answer the examiner's question; instead they repeated or attempted to reformulate the question and showed pronunciation/spelling uncertainty. To improve: answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two supporting details using linking words, keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Also practice pronunciation of key words ("child/children") and avoid repeating the examiner's question.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used it to ride with friends around the neighborhood on weekends. Because it was lightweight and reliable, I often rode it to school during the summer.

提案: The student again repeated the question and made grammar errors ("a bikes", "in a country"). To improve: respond directly with a topic sentence expressing your opinion, then add a reason or example using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct article and plural forms and be specific about your country.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle to save time and money.

× Did you have a bike when you were a childer? Children.

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the incorrect word 'childer' and then wrote 'Children.' The correct singular form for one person's childhood is 'child.' This is a singular and spelling error. Use 'child' after 'you were' because 'you' refers to a single person's past state. Suggestion: memorize irregular noun forms (child → children) and use the singular 'child' when referring to 'you' in this context.

× Do you think a bikes are popular in a country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The sentence combines the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'bikes,' which is incorrect. Also 'a country' is too vague in this context; the question should refer to the student's country, so use 'your country.' Use either 'a bike is' (singular) or 'bikes are' (plural). Suggestion: drop the article 'a' when using plural nouns and use appropriate possessive 'your' instead of 'a' for a specific reference.