Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add a brief specific detail about the bike or how you used it. Use linking or time words if needed.

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue mountain bike that I rode almost every day after school. I loved taking it on rough paths near our house because it had strong tires and good suspension.

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons (e.g., transport, sport, affordability) using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid vague phrases like "big market" without context.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, city residents often cycle to work to avoid traffic, and there are many local shops selling affordable bikes.

× Yes, I have a bike. It's a mountain bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was a mountain bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense ('have', 'is') is inconsistent with the time frame. Suggestion: change verbs to past tense to match the question ('had', 'was').

× Yes, I think by our people in my country because it's got a big market here.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there is a big market for them here.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing elements. 'I think by our people' is ungrammatical; you need a clear subject and verb ('bikes are popular'). Also 'it's got a big market' is informal and unclear; use 'there is a big market for them' to indicate popularity. Suggestion: rephrase to 'bikes are popular in my country because there is a big market for them here.'