Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. Give a direct response (yes/no or short statement) with a brief supporting detail. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and include a linking word if you add more than one idea.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, so I learned to balance easily. Because it was sturdy, I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a clear opinion followed by specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, however) to connect ideas and keep your answer concise and relevant.

例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bike lanes are becoming more common. However, in rural areas cars are still the main transport option.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). The question is past tense, so the answer should use past tense: 'had'. Also include a subject 'I' and an auxiliary only if forming negative or question. Suggestion: form a straightforward declarative past-tense sentence: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or a short answer 'Yes, I did.'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student again repeated the question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure issue (type 26). To respond appropriately, keep the present simple tense: 'I think' and maintain 'are popular'. Alternatively give a short answer: 'Yes, I do.' Suggestion: avoid echoing the question; give a clear declarative or short response: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'.