Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question, so it did not answer. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no) and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and avoid hesitation sounds like "umm".

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home. Because the park was quiet, I felt confident practicing there every weekend.

提案: Your answer gives an opinion but is hesitant and has unclear phrasing. To improve, state your opinion directly, use linking words (because/so/therefore), provide a specific reason or example, and avoid filler words. Use more precise vocabulary (electric bikes, e-scooters, motorcycles) and one supporting detail to be coherent and informative.

例: I don't think traditional bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer electric bikes for commuting. For example, many commuters use compact e-bikes due to their convenience and low cost, so regular bikes are mainly used by children or hobbyists.

× I don't think that there is a popular bike in our country because, umm, probably in our country it's more, uh, famous, those electric bike.

✓ I don't think that there is a single popular bicycle in our country because electric bikes are more famous here.

The original sentence has singular/plural and article errors. 'a popular bike' followed by 'those electric bike' is inconsistent: 'those' requires plural noun 'bikes', and 'electric bike' should be plural when speaking generally. Also 'bike' is informal; 'bicycle' is clearer. I used 'a single popular bicycle' to match 'there is' (singular) or alternatively changed to plural 'electric bikes are' to correct subject-verb agreement and plurality. Suggestion: decide whether you mean 'there is a popular bicycle' (singular) or 'there are popular bicycles' (plural) and make determiners and noun number agree; use plural verbs with plural nouns (e.g., 'electric bikes are more famous').