Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudur ama daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı. Konuya doğrudan giriş yapan açık bir konu cümlesi kur, ardından kısa bir destekleyici cümle ile detay ver. Gereksiz sesli kesintilerden (umm, ah) kaçın ve cümleleri birleştirmek için basit bağlaçlar kullan. Ayrıca tekil örnek ve duygusal bir ifade ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirebilirsin.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I remember riding it every afternoon after school. It was my favorite toy because it gave me a lot of freedom, and I quickly learned to ride without training wheels.

提案: Cevap belirsiz ve kısa; doğrudan görüş bildirip nedenlerini veya bir örnek vererek destekle. Net bir fikir ifade et, ardından 1–2 kısa gerekçe sun. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, however) kullanarak tutarlı bir yapı oluştur. Ayrıca kesin olmadığında ‘I think’ veya ‘In my opinion’ gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsin.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students, because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many university students prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, I had a bike and I used to. Umm. Yes I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about 7 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I used to ride it. Umm. Yes I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about 7 years old.

The phrase 'used to' requires a following base verb to show a habitual past action (used to + verb). In the original sentence 'used to' is left incomplete, making it ungrammatical. Add the base verb 'ride' to complete the structure. Suggestion: when using 'used to' always follow it with the base form of a verb, e.g., 'I used to ride a bike.'

× I guess it is umm, but. I don't know what to say.

✓ I guess they are, umm, but I don't know what to say.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural), so the subject in the response should agree in number. Using 'it is' refers to a singular subject; the correct plural form is 'they are.' Also punctuation and filler words should be combined into one coherent sentence. Suggestion: match the verb form to the noun number in the question ('bikes' -> 'they are').