Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答题时要注意时态一致性和句子简洁性。先用一句话直接回答问题（过去时），然后用一到两句补充具体细节或原因，使用连接词使语流更自然。例如，将动词时态改为过去时（rode）并给出具体频率或场景会更好。此外注意避免信息重复，控制在最多五句内。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it once or twice a week to practice my balance and stay active, especially in the park near my house, where I felt safe learning new tricks.

提案: 回答要更有条理并使用连接词来表明对比，同时注意语言准确性（单复数和双重否定）。先给出总体观点，再说明例外情况并提供具体原因或例子。可以用连接词如 'however' 或 'although' 来衔接句子，避免重复词（例如 'not not'）。

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute or keep fit. However, in my city cycling is less common due to poor road conditions and heavy traffic, which makes it unsafe for daily rides.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I ride it once or twice a week to practice my balance and stay active.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I rode it once or twice a week to practice my balance and stay active.

这是过去时态错误。句子开始使用过去时 had、was，表示过去的习惯性动作也应使用过去时，因此 ride 应改为过去式 rode。建议：在描述过去发生或过去习惯的动作时，整个句子保持过去时一致，使用动词的过去式。

× Yes, of course in my country many people choose to ride bike to go to work or just keep fit.

✓ Yes, of course in my country many people choose to ride bikes to go to work or just keep fit.

这里名词可数复数使用不当。bike 为可数名词，当指泛指许多人骑自行车时，应使用复数 bikes 或使用不定冠词 a bike（单数泛指）。建议：复数可数名词在表示一般习惯时用复数，改为 ride bikes。

× But in my city it's not that popular because the road is not not good for bike riding.

✓ But in my city it's not that popular because the roads are not good for bike riding.

原句中有两处问题：一是 road 用作可数名词时应使用复数 roads（指多条路或道路条件总体），二是出现了双重否定的 not not，应去掉一个。此处还可将 bike riding 改为 riding bikes，但 roads are not good for bike riding 更自然。建议：注意可数名词单复数一致，并避免重复否定。