Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirilmeli. Şu anki cevap kısa ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor (zaman uyumsuzluğu: geçmiş için 'had' kullanılmalı, renk tanımı için 'blue' ya da 'blue one' gibi daha doğal ifade). Ayrıca cevap tek bir cümle ile sınırlı kalmış; 2–3 cümleyle kısa destekleyici detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz (ör. ne zaman kullandığınız, nasıl hissettiğiniz veya bisikletin özellikleri). Bağlaçlar (e.g. 'and', 'so', 'because') akıcı bağlama yardımcı olur ama gereksiz tekrar edilmemeli.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle throughout my childhood, and I used to ride it to school every day. It was quite sturdy and I remember feeling very proud of it.

提案: Cevap daha düzenli ve açıklayıcı olmalı. Bazı dilbilgisi ve kelime seçim hataları var ('every people' yerine 'most people' ya da 'many people'; 'bicycle roads' yerine 'bike lanes' veya 'cycle paths'). Ayrıca 'by the way' gereksiz ve konuşmayı koparıyor; yerine nedenleri bağlayan 'because' veya 'mainly' kullanılmalı. İki kısa cümleyle görüş ve iki destekleyici gerekçe (ör. altyapı eksikliği, kültürel tercihler, güvenlik endişeleri) ekleyin ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to travel by car because cities lack bike lanes and traffic can make cycling unsafe.

× When I was a child. I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

ID: 6 The sentence mixes past time reference 'When I was a child' with present tense 'I have'. Use the simple past 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent tense by putting verbs in the past when describing past events.

× It's a blue color.

✓ It was blue.

ID: 13 Saying 'a blue color' is unnecessary and awkward; also the context is past, so use past tense 'was'. Use the adjective 'blue' directly with the noun: 'It was blue' or 'It was a blue bike.' Suggestion: Use adjective before the noun or link adjective with 'be' as appropriate to tense.

× I don't think so because every people, uh, prefer travel by car.

✓ I don't think so because most people prefer to travel by car.

ID: 12 'Every people' is incorrect; 'every' should be used with singular nouns (every person) or use 'most people'. Also 'prefer travel' needs an infinitive 'to travel'. Suggestion: Use 'most people' for generalization and 'prefer to + verb' for preference.

× So by the way, we don't have a, uh, bicycle roads, clearly.

✓ So, by the way, we don't have bicycle lanes, clearly.

ID: 11 'Bicycle roads' is not the common collocation; 'bicycle lanes' or 'bike lanes' is more natural. Also 'a' before plural 'roads' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use the correct noun phrase 'bicycle lanes' and remove the indefinite article when using plural.