Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Sua resposta está inadequada em tempo verbal e muito curta. Responda diretamente usando o tempo correto (passado) e acrescente detalhes específicos (por exemplo, com quem andava, que tipo de bicicleta era, ou por que gostava). Use 2–4 frases e conectores simples para maior naturalidade.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.

提案: A resposta tem erros gramaticais, vocabulário impreciso e está fragmentada. Diga diretamente sua opinião, corrija 'in my country', use conectores (for example, because, so) e dê detalhes específicos sobre quem usa bicicletas e quando (trabalho, lazer) em 2–4 frases.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute to work because traffic is heavy, and others ride on weekends for exercise and leisure.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Do' is present tense; replace with past tense 'did' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Pay attention to the time expression in the question and use the same verb tense (past) in the answer.

× Yes, bikes are really popular on my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.

The correct preposition with 'country' is 'in', not 'on'. Use 'in my country' to indicate something common within a country. Suggestion: Learn common preposition collocations (e.g., 'in my country', 'on the island', 'at the station').

× Many people used to go to work or. Weekend.

✓ Many people used to go to work or go out at the weekend.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect punctuation. 'Or.' is an incomplete choice and 'Weekend' needs an article or preposition. Also 'used to' implies past habits; keep that structure and complete the contrast: 'go to work or go out at the weekend.' Suggestion: Avoid fragments; ensure choices after 'or' are parallel and include necessary prepositions (e.g., 'at the weekend').