Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, verb tense and vocabulary. Use past tense for childhood events, correct word (bike not bug), and give a brief reason or detail to expand naturally. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and use a linking word if you add information.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or used public transport, so I never learned to ride one.

提案: Expand your answer with specific details and a linking word to support your opinion. Use examples or comparisons (e.g., by region, age group, or purpose) and avoid one-word replies. Keep to a maximum of about 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where people use them to avoid traffic. For example, many students and young professionals cycle to work or university because it is cheap and convenient.

× No, I don't have a bug when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Errors: (1) Past tense issue (ID 5) — the time reference 'when I was a child' requires past tense; 'don't have' is present tense and should be 'didn't have'. (2) Incorrect use of word/pronoun (choose correct noun) — the student wrote 'bug' but intended 'bike'. Suggestions: Use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past (use 'didn't have'). Check vocabulary: 'bike' is the correct noun for a bicycle. The corrected sentence is 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'