Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and use clearer, natural phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and add one or two specific details using a linking word. Keep to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a simple bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends around the neighborhood, and we would race each other on weekends. Because it was light and easy to handle, I felt very confident riding it.

提案: Make sentences grammatically accurate and more concise; use linking words to organize reasons and include specific examples. Correct collocations (e.g., 'ride them to work or school', 'bike-sharing services') and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. They are inexpensive and convenient for short trips, so many people ride them to work or school. In addition, bike-sharing services have become widespread on city streets, which makes cycling even more common.

× Yes, I owned a simple bike and roaded often with my friends.

✓ Yes, I owned a simple bike and rode often with my friends.

The verb 'ride' is irregular; its past tense form is 'rode', not 'road'. Use 'rode' for past actions. Suggestion: memorize common irregular verbs (ride-rode-ridden) and review past-tense forms before writing.

× They are cheap and useful for short trips, so many people will ride them to walk or school, and there are also bike sharing service on the streets.

✓ They are cheap and useful for short trips, so many people ride them to walk or go to school, and there are also bike-sharing services on the streets.

Multiple issues match listed types: 'will ride' is inappropriate because the sentence describes habitual present action, so present tense 'ride' is correct (Future tense issue ID 7). Also 'to walk or school' misses a verb 'go' before 'school' but only errors matching provided list are corrected. Additionally, 'bike sharing service' has number agreement and word formation problems (not corrected here per instructions). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual facts ('many people ride them'), include verbs for parallel phrases ('walk or go to school'), and use plural noun 'services' for multiple offerings; hyphenate 'bike-sharing' as a compound adjective.