Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha net, akıcı ve tam cümlelerle olmalıdır. Gereksiz duraklamalardan (uh, um) kaçının; doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından kısa destekleyici detay verin. Örneğin kimindi, ne tür bir bisikletti ve nasıl hissettiğinizi belirtin. Bağlaç kullanarak cümleler arasındaki akışı sağlayın.

例: Yes, I did. It wasn't my own bicycle; I used my friend's small bike often when I was around eight years old. I enjoyed riding it in the neighborhood because it felt freeing and helped me make friends. As a result, I got more confident riding on slightly busier streets later.

提案: Cevaba doğrudan görüşünüzle başlayın ve ardından nedenini kısa ve belirgin örneklerle açıklayın. Gereksiz tekrarlamalardan ve duraklamalardan kaçının. Bağlaçlar (for example, however, because) kullanarak fikirleri birleştirin ve spesifik karşılaştırmalar veya gözlemler ekleyin.

例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer cars because public infrastructure favors motor traffic and bike lanes are scarce. However, bicycles are common in many European cities where cycling infrastructure and culture are well established, which makes cycling safer and more convenient.

× Uh, yes, uh, but uh, cycle, not mine, my friends uh, cycle a little bike.

✓ Yes, but it was not mine; my friend had a small bike.

The original sentence has fragmented structure, missing articles and incorrect noun forms. Use a clear subject and verb phrase: 'it was not mine' to refer to 'a bike' and 'my friend had a small bike' to show possession. Also change 'friends' to singular 'friend' if speaking of one friend, or rephrase 'my friends had small bikes' if plural. Improve fluency by removing filler words like 'uh'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× And no, uh, I, uh, I, I my country not popular uh bikes, but uh, it's very popular in Europe uh, when I, uh, when I.

✓ No, bicycles are not very popular in my country, but they are very popular in Europe.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and word order. Use 'bicycles are not very popular' to match plural subject with plural verb. Include a clear subject 'they' or 'bicycles' and correct word order 'in my country'. Remove unfinished fragments like 'when I'. Improve clarity by combining ideas into one coherent sentence. Grammar problem type ID:27