Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, slightly more natural and add a brief reason or short supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, correct article use and verb forms, then add one concise reason or memory using a linking word like “because” or “but.”

例: No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed a neighbour’s bike to ride around the park.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word such as “because” or “since.” Use plural nouns and natural phrasing (e.g., “more affordable” and “convenient”).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are more affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to run errands in crowded cities.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

Missing the article 'a' before the noun 'child'. This is a sentence structure/article error: English requires an article or determiner before singular countable nouns. Suggestion: use 'a child' (or 'a kid') when referring to being a child in general.

× Yes, the bikes are popular in our country because it is cheaper to buy and easy to go.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because they are cheaper to buy and easier to use for getting around.

Multiple issues: unnecessary definite article 'the' before the general plural 'bikes' (article error), subject-pronoun agreement and verb form ('it is' should match plural 'bikes' so use 'they are'), and missing comparative form/adjective agreement ('easy to go' is ungrammatical; use 'easier to use for getting around' or 'easy to use'). Suggestion: remove 'the' for general statements about a category, match plural subjects with plural verbs/pronouns, and use appropriate adjective/comparative forms and a clear verb phrase (e.g., 'easier to use').

× That's why I think the bikes are popular in our country.

✓ That's why I think bikes are popular in our country.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before the general plural 'bikes' (sentence structure/article issue). When making general statements about a whole class, English typically omits 'the'. Suggestion: remove 'the' to say 'bikes are popular' for a general truth.