Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và ngữ pháp sai; bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn nêu có hay không có xe đạp, rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ nguyên nhân, tần suất sử dụng, cảm xúc). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần nối ý. Tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'That's but it wasn't repair'.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was an old hand-me-down, so it often needed repairs and I couldn't ride it for long periods. However, I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood every weekend, especially to visit my friends.

提案: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng diễn đạt lộn xộn, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason), rồi đưa ra 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: số người dùng, các chương trình khuyến khích, lợi ích môi trường). Dùng liên từ như 'because', 'therefore' hợp lý, và tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt gây lỗi như 'nobody people'.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country because people are more aware of environmental issues and cities are improving cycling infrastructure. For example, some municipalities have introduced bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes, so more commuters now choose cycling as a cheap and green option.

× That's but it wasn't repair.

✓ No, it wasn't repaired.

The sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. Use 'No' as a natural short answer for 'Did you have a bike...' and 'repaired' (past participle) after 'was' to form the passive voice. Suggestion: Use 'No, it wasn't repaired.' or 'No, it wasn't in good repair.' to sound natural.

× This I think so because nobody people provide these environmental protections and carbon reduces, so bicycle will become a small part of the solutions to contribute to a cleaner environment.

✓ I think so because people do not provide environmental protection and reduce carbon emissions, so bicycles will become a small part of the solution to contribute to a cleaner environment.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun/order at start ('This I think so' -> 'I think so'); unnecessary word 'nobody people' should be 'people do not' or 'nobody'; incorrect noun phrase 'these environmental protections' -> 'environmental protection' (uncountable) and verb phrase 'carbon reduces' -> 'reduce carbon emissions'; article/number agreement 'bicycle will become a small part of the solutions' -> 'bicycles will become a small part of the solution' (use plural subject 'bicycles' or keep singular but match 'solution'). Suggestions: Start with 'I think so' then use 'people do not provide environmental protection / do not reduce carbon emissions' and 'bicycles will become a small part of the solution.'