Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề đúng thì (past simple) và sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng liên từ nếu cần. Tránh câu ngắn không hoàn chỉnh và dùng đại từ/động từ đúng (ví dụ: 'I had', không phải 'I am' hay 'I were').

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends. Because it was reliable and easy to use, I learned to cycle quickly.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu chính xác về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, nhiều lặp từ và phát âm sai dẫn đến hiểu nhầm. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu khẳng định rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (vì tiện lợi, rẻ, tốt cho sức khỏe) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp như 'popular' và 'useful'.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, especially in crowded cities. Also, cycling is seen as a healthy and environmentally friendly way to travel.

× Yes, I am.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student used 'I am' which is incorrect in response to 'Did you have a bike...' The question is past simple; the appropriate short answer uses 'did' + subject: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: use auxiliary matching question tense for short answers (past simple -> did).

× I have a pile.

✓ I had a bicycle.

'I have a pile' is unclear and ungrammatical in context. The question asks about having a bike in childhood, so use past simple 'had' and a correct noun 'a bicycle' or 'a bike.' Suggestion: use clear noun and past tense: 'I had a bike.'

× When I were a child I had to.

✓ When I was a child, I had one.

The student wrote 'When I were a child' — 'were' is incorrect with singular first person past; use 'was.' Also 'I had to' is incomplete and likely intended 'I had one.' Suggestion: use 'When I was a child, I had one.' to express possession in the past simple.

× Yes, I till the pies are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence contains multiple errors: 'till the pies' is incorrect words; likely meant 'think bikes.' Also 'are popular' is present simple which is correct for a general statement; keep present simple. Suggestion: use 'I think bikes are popular in my country.'

× It is a very very useful in in.

✓ They are very, very useful.

The student used 'It is...useful' but 'bikes' is plural, so use 'They are.' Repetition 'in in' is extraneous. 'Very' is an adverb modifying 'useful'—two 'very's are informal but acceptable; keep one or two. Suggestion: say 'They are very useful.'

× In every house.

✓ They are in every house.

Fragment: 'In every house.' lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence matching previous subject: 'They are in every house.' Suggestion: combine with prior sentence or make it complete: 'Bikes are in every house.'