Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızı tekrar etmek yerine doğrudan soruyu yanıtlayın. Kısa ve doğal bir giriş cümlesi kurun, ardından yaşınız, bisikletin türü veya bisikletle ilgili bir anı gibi bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (ör. "when", "because", "so") kullanarak cümlenin akışını sağlayın. Toplam cümle sayısını 3-4 cümlede tutun.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a small red bike with training wheels, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I rode it every day in the neighborhood until I grew out of it.

提案: Soruyu tekrar etmek yerine doğrudan görüşünüzü belirtin. Popülerlik nedenlerini ve örneklerle destekleyin (şehir içi kullanım, çevresel nedenler, altyapı eksiklikleri vb.). Bağlaçlar kullanarak fikirlerinizi düzenleyin ve cevap uzunluğunu 2-4 cümlede sınırlayın.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and good for the environment, although poor cycling infrastructure is still a problem in some areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction provides a proper past simple affirmative answer to match the question's tense. Suggestion: use past simple (had) for completed actions in the past and include a subject and verb to form a full sentence.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a present tense usage/context issue (ID 6). The correction supplies a clear first-person present simple answer that matches the question. Suggestion: use present simple (think/are) for general opinions and state your opinion rather than echoing the question.