Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural, and include a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (e.g., who gave it, when, and a short memory). Use correct tense and possessive forms, and keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I remember riding it around the neighborhood every weekend. It was bright red and helped me feel more independent.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason or statistic and a linking word for coherence. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid absolute claims like "everybody." Keep it concise and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students and workers cycle daily because it's inexpensive and convenient, so cycling is a common mode of transport in both cities and small towns.

× That bike is bought by my father and my 8th birth birthday.

✓ That bike was bought by my father for my eighth birthday.

The speaker is describing a past completed action (purchase) so the simple past passive 'was bought' is correct rather than present perfect passive 'is bought'. Also 'and my 8th birth birthday' is ungrammatical: use 'for my eighth birthday' and spell out ordinal numbers in writing. Use 'eighth' instead of '8th' in formal corrections.

× Yes, I've got one.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question asks about possession when the student was a child (past time), so the past simple 'had' is appropriate rather than present perfect 'I've got' which implies current possession. Match the tense to the time reference in the question.

× In my view everybody almost have a bike.

✓ In my view almost everybody has a bike.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Also adverb placement: 'almost' should precede 'everybody' or be placed before the verb. Rearranging to 'almost everybody has' yields natural word order.

× Most people will go to school by bike or work.

✓ Most people go to school or work by bike.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so simple present 'go' is appropriate rather than 'will go' which suggests future. Also natural word order places 'by bike' after the verbs and joins 'school or work' as the destinations.